Writing Essays: Writing your conclusion

Write your conclusion by revisiting the topic in general (you may not need to mention each point again but they need to be covered in your meaning. See below how this could be done.

TOPIC

Good health care is the right of all Australians. How does the state of Aboriginal health care relate to that of non-indigenous Australians? Why is this so and how can this situation be addressed so that there is parity across all segments of Australian society? Discuss

CONCLUSION

The low health status of Indigenous people, especially compared to the health of the wider Australian community is a national and international disgrace. There are no quick fixes - it may take years to see appreciable improvements - but the framework needs to be laid to make change happen. Addressing the issues underpinning this situation is fundamental to not only to achieving equity in health outcomes for Aboriginal people but is central to achieving a sustainable quality of life within all our Australian communities.

The conclusion should also be consistent with the introduction. See how the following matches the conclusion also.

INTRODUCTION

Good health care is the overall wellness including the not just the physical, but also the social, emotional and cultural , of the individual and of the community in which he lives.This is the right of all Australians.The relative health status of Australia's indigenous population is indeed much poorer that the rest of the Australian population.. This is largely due to inadequate living conditions, lifestyle, lack of education and employment, and historical conditions. To improve the health status of Australia's indigenous population the government needs to allocate more funds to health services and the improvement of overall living conditions.